Ottergami journal updated review in verse

[essayfaire]

Here is my updated review of the Ottergami journal, now that I have been using it for a few months.  I originally wrote it out in the journal but decided to copy it out onto a writing pad to make it more legible.

 

In the journal:

 

and here is the more carefully writ version (also redactions incorporated!):

 

I see a correction already, should have been "pages'" .  Apologies.

[amberleadavis]

Very creative, but will you buy another?

[essayfaire]

On 7/16/2022 at 8:48 PM, amberleadavis said:

Very creative, but will you buy another?

No - page two of the version written in the journal itself(but not the neater copy) :

 

Verdict: Regretfully, will not repurchase one of these.

[amberleadavis]

3 hours ago, essayfaire said:

No - page two of the version written in the journal itself(but not the neater copy) :

 

Verdict: Regretfully, will not repurchase one of these.

 

thank you

[essayfaire]

23 minutes ago, amberleadavis said:

 

thank you

Sorry.  Makes me sad as it has so many great features, but at the end of the day, the journal's like carrying around a brick.