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#21 teodormircea

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Posted 08 April 2017 - 19:40

Hi all,
What do you think?
Small or medium size?

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#22 teodormircea

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Posted 19 October 2017 - 09:03

Hi all,

Long time I didn't posted something to show my penmanship evolution, but here it is.

@teodormircea

 

Directly to my last post

 

 


Edited by teodormircea, 19 October 2017 - 09:22.


#23 Incongruent

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Posted 20 January 2018 - 04:50

I think the handwriting is wonderful. (You must have a lot of leisure hours to be used for improvement)

A bit of critique on the Spencerian, however: the shades in the script are usually meant to be short and snappy. Capital stems should only have the lower half shaded. To get the right side of the line straight (rather than bulging at the shade) on the stems, twist the holder. The lowercase letters should not be shaded as often — once every two letters is the maximum recommended by the Ornamental Penmanship handbook, and Spencerian business writing should be shaded less still.

#24 Manalto

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Posted 28 January 2018 - 11:21

Looking good, Teodor. Incongruent, your suggestions are most helpful to me, too. Thanks!


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#25 BlueJ

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Posted 28 January 2018 - 18:22

What is the source of the quotations? Confucius?







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