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Posted 22 June 2014 - 19:21

@cactusneedle

 

sir you are right.There should be a capital "I" for personal pronoun

 

and i will try to work on the height of letters.

 

thanks a lot for the feedback


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Posted 18 July 2014 - 20:41

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Posted 22 July 2014 - 06:16

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Do you find Cursive notebooks in your area? The ones with 4 lines? Use them to practice consistent letter sizes, and the ascender/descenders.


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Posted 23 July 2014 - 00:32

^^

Do you find Cursive notebooks in your area? The ones with 4 lines? Use them to practice consistent letter sizes, and the ascender/descenders.

yes they are available in book store.i will get them this time when i visit.


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Posted 25 July 2014 - 13:55

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Posted 05 August 2014 - 00:30

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Posted 13 August 2014 - 20:25

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Posted 15 September 2014 - 00:52

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Posted 17 September 2014 - 16:23

Your handwriting has improved greatly. Try using a flex pen.

You may get more feedback if you stopped posting pictures of your copy of religious pieces. Religion and politics are things to stay away from except on forums devoted to those topics.

That's assuming that you do want feedback. :unsure:



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Posted 18 September 2014 - 04:11

You seem to be having a decender problem similar to me.

The decender should only go down about half a line.  Similar to the height of the lower case letters.

You might try drawing a pencil line half way between the printed lines.  That will help to guide your letter height for lower case and how far down the decenders go.

 

I tend to exagerate my decenders, so I go down farther and they are somewhat large.

 

It will use up more paper but if you skip every other line, it is easier to write without the writing from line below crashing into a decenter from the line above.  It will also be easier to clearly see and evaluate your writing, as the text won't be so jammed together.

 

Gud job and Gud Luk


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Posted 11 October 2014 - 12:23

you are right sir.if i have to write "f" twice then they are both different in length and size

 

i will try to work on it


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Posted 12 October 2014 - 23:11

Try to write using French ruled (Seyes) paper. Both Clairefontaine and Oxford make it and it can be bought from Goulet Pens or Amazon. This has four lines instead of one, which helps to control the height of all parts of the letter.



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Posted 15 October 2014 - 19:21

Try to write using French ruled (Seyes) paper. Both Clairefontaine and Oxford make it and it can be bought from Goulet Pens or Amazon. This has four lines instead of one, which helps to control the height of all parts of the letter.

 i will try to get it

till then i will draw an extra line in between the lines to practice

i am also considering a flex nib fountain pen


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Posted 15 October 2014 - 21:16

A general question:

 

Some of us do not have ready access to, or can afford, copious quantities of quality paper. In consideration of this is it accpetable to practice your hand using a pencil on cheap paper instead? I am hemming and hawing over this as I only have a limited supply of Rhodia paper, but piles of cheap printer stock.


 

 


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Posted 16 October 2014 - 20:35

A general question:

 

Some of us do not have ready access to, or can afford, copious quantities of quality paper. In consideration of this is it accpetable to practice your hand using a pencil on cheap paper instead? I am hemming and hawing over this as I only have a limited supply of Rhodia paper, but piles of cheap printer stock.

 

I've watched many handwriting videos in which it is suggested that you begin practising with a pencil. You can write lightly and even vary the pressure to imitate flexing.



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Posted 12 November 2014 - 00:55

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