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Quite a few German pen companies seem to tailor a portion of their line for students, starting with primary and all the way up to university. The German pen company, ONLINE, is one of them, and they offer quite a range of economical fountain pens for youngsters and adults alike. The company is fairly new - established in 1991 - and currently offers two major lines: Young.Line, and Top.Line.

 

The Young.Line is mainly purposed for students, with trendy styles and durability in mind. They also offer things like erasers, pen cases, and other pen paraphernalia. Since they are a newcomer to the German pen industry where many major players have been waging marketing wars for a century, they seem to have focused on everyday-usable pens.

 

For European customers, the Online pens are available - guess what - online, and probably in retailers if you are in Germany. If you are in the US, their products are available from Paradise Pen, but ONLY the Academy Flash line.

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  1. Appearance & Design (1-10) - A modern spin on Lamy Safari?
    The pen is not flashy in design, despite its name. Germans seem to have some preference for big, silver clips, and this one is no exception, with a big, "look at me" kind of a silver clip attached to the cap from a black top. I purchased the pink model, but they are also available in black, orange, red, white, and yellow.

    They also have the "same design but different metalwork" kind of a model, called Viva Colori, which are available in black, purple, lilac, blue, green, and yellow. In this version, all the black parts are replaced by stainless-steel-looking equivalents. The logo of the company and the country of origin are engraved on the cap's black portion, right above where the clip is attached, and also on the nib.

    http://i1332.photobucket.com/albums/w614/GabrielleduVent/DSC_0278_zps67dc39b5.jpg

    There is something a little odd going on with the cap, and where the cap end generally meets if you cap the pen or post it. For some reason, the cap end is cut into a wave, with the back of the end cut slightly lower than the front. This dictates the orientation of the cap - it doesn't allow rotation without getting the cap loose - which was something new for me.

    http://i1332.photobucket.com/albums/w614/GabrielleduVent/DSC_0279_zpse62d3b95.jpg

    It does, however, allow seamless attachment.

    http://i1332.photobucket.com/albums/w614/GabrielleduVent/DSC_0276_zps9fc4b6f6.jpg


    9/10
  2. Construction & Quality (1-10) - It seems to handle some beating well.
    It's clearly a student pen, so it's designed to handle a 10 year old running around with a rock inside the bag next to the pen. I haven't tried to scratch it or drop OED on it, so I'm not sure just how much pressure or momentum this thing can suffer, but the construction is quite sturdy. The nib is made of iridium, and it doesn't allow much flexing. The clip won't be coming off any time soon. A bit of rough-handling won't mar this pen.

    The grip is an ergonomic grip, and has a rubbery texture. It feels comfortable, but has the same scheme as Lamy Safari's "thou shalt place thy finger here in this manner" kind of a "wedge". For those who abhor that Lamy grip, this won't be your new best friend.

    http://i1332.photobucket.com/albums/w614/GabrielleduVent/DSC_0283_zps52ef1e31.jpg

    http://i1332.photobucket.com/albums/w614/GabrielleduVent/DSC_0286_zps22818f94.jpg

    9/10
  3. Weight & Dimensions (1-10) - German pens seem to have a standard.
    Weight: 41g
    Length: 141mm x 17mm x 12mm, 169mm long posted

    Upon comparison, the length is almost identical (capped, at least) to Lamy Safari.

    http://i1332.photobucket.com/albums/w614/GabrielleduVent/DSC_0275_zpsc8f006a4.jpg

    It fits my hand well, and it's not too thin nor too thick. The cap is light, so it doesn't make the pen head-heavy when I post it.

    10/10
  4. Nib & Performance (1-10) - Slippery when wet?
    The nib is only available in M if you are in the US. If you are buying directly from ONLINE, you can also purchase in EF; there are also nib/grip portions available separately as L (for lefties) and ballpoint.

    http://www.online-pen.de/shop/media/catalog/product/cache/1/image/9df78eab33525d08d6e5fb8d27136e95/G/r/Griffstuecke_Academy.jpg_14.jpg

    The nib itself allows very little flexing, and the tip is rounded. This, for some reason, returned almost NO feedback; it isn't the smoothness of slicing into cheese with a very sharp knife, which is what a Japanese pen feels like, but rather slipping on oil that someone spilt on a tile floor. As I'm not used to that kind of slippery nib, it took me by surprise.

    The nib is not the angular shape Lamy Safari and Platinum Preppy sport, but the standard shape. It has the engraving "ONLINE Germany" on it.

    http://i1332.photobucket.com/albums/w614/GabrielleduVent/DSC_0277_zps64cf4f34.jpg

    Or it might be the ink. I filled it with Noodler's Shah's Rose.

    7/10
  5. Filling System & Maintenance (1-10) - Cartridge system, will take international converters
    The filling system is your regular international cartridge, and accepts long international converters.

    http://i1332.photobucket.com/albums/w614/GabrielleduVent/DSC_0280_zpscc0238e2.jpg

    It came with a blue cartridge, and an inexplicable object that is shaped like a cartridge, but is empty, and has no bottom. The part where the nipple goes into the feed is a slightly transparent plastic, and the plastic itself is almost black, so I don't think I'll notice if there was any staining anyway.

    http://i1332.photobucket.com/albums/w614/GabrielleduVent/DSC_0281_zpsdac58611.jpg


    10/10
  6. Cost & Value (1-10) - It's priced appropriately for a student pen.
    The price in the US is $18.95, plus local tax. If you buy it direct from the website, it is 10,99 plus 19% tax (that's roughly $15, tax not included). It's not going to break your bank, and it serves as a pen, and it probably handles rough handling.

    Including tax (which came out to be 13,08 euros), the US equivalent would be about $18. So either way, it's very appropriately priced.

    The exchangeable nibs are 3,99 per grip/nib, plus 19% tax.

    10/10
  7. Conclusion - It's a good pen for students, and those who want a pen that they don't have to fuss about.
    While this pen would not be replacing my most often-used pen, it's definitely going to be kept in rotation. My only gripe was the lack of nib varieties, but I generally don't use italic so I have no problem with that. It'd look odd on an executive desk, but for students, writers, and those who are looking utility rather than design/prestige, this would be a good pen to buy.

    TOTAL: 9.16/10


    (Grip image courtesy of ONLINE Schreibgeräte.)

Tes rires retroussés comme à son bord la rose,


Effacent mon dépit de ta métamorphose;


Tu t'éveilles, alors le rêve est oublié.



-Jean Cocteau, from Plaint-Chant, 1923

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While I can't say that I see myself getting one of these pens anytime soon (regardless of the fact that pink was originally a masculine colour :rolleyes: ), I must say that these seem like a great bunch of pens. Where do you find all these, Gabrielle? :))

 

An excellent review, I must say. These look like great daily writers, too. Now, if only there were other colour palettes available XD

 

Cheers!

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Nice review! You made me buy one (black, of course) as I was just looking for an inexpensive travel & work pen that takes international carts. Much cheaper than importing the Pilot MR. Looks quite sturdy too and I like the fact that I does not pretend to look overly classy.

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Wow, I must've been half asleep while reading the review! I completely missed out on there being other colors available. Now, I've yet to own a yellow fountain pen; I wonder how much shipping to the Philippines will cost? After all, an affordable daily workhorse is hardly an extravagant purchase, yes? :rolleyes:

 

Cheers!

"The price of an object should not only be what you had to pay for it, but also what you've had to sacrifice in order to obtain it." - <i>The Wisdom of The Internet</i><p class='bbc_center'><center><img src="http://i59.tinypic.com/jr4g43.jpg"/></center>

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Once again, such a bright review! Making my retinas sore.

The Good Captain

"Meddler's 'Salamander' - almost as good as the real thing!"

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Hi,

 

Wow! That pen has such a bright color! I'm not so into hot pink. I'm more of a light pink person, but anyway, I've always found Online pens to be quite good for the price. They don't cost too much, but they often come with nice nibs and feeds.

 

Dillon

Stolen: Aurora Optima Demonstrator Red ends Medium nib. Serial number 1216 and Aurora 98 Cartridge/Converter Black bark finish (Archivi Storici) with gold cap. Reward if found. Please contact me if you have seen these pens.

Please send vial orders and other messages to fpninkvials funny-round-mark-thing gmail strange-mark-thing com. My shop is open once again if you need help with your pen.

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Dillon

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I'm not a fan of "HOT PINK!", but there aren't many "soft pink" "baby pink" pens available that aren't in 3 digits for pricing. The colour of the barrel is actually much brighter than the Lamy Safari raspberry - think liquid highlighter fluid - which made me go "errr..." .

 

Viva Colori has softer colours, but they aren't available in the US, as far as I know. Why Paradise Pen decided against getting THOSE as well, I've no idea.

Tes rires retroussés comme à son bord la rose,


Effacent mon dépit de ta métamorphose;


Tu t'éveilles, alors le rêve est oublié.



-Jean Cocteau, from Plaint-Chant, 1923

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I'm not a fan of "HOT PINK!", but there aren't many "soft pink" "baby pink" pens available that aren't in 3 digits for pricing. The colour of the barrel is actually much brighter than the Lamy Safari raspberry - think liquid highlighter fluid - which made me go "errr..." .

 

Viva Colori has softer colours, but they aren't available in the US, as far as I know. Why Paradise Pen decided against getting THOSE as well, I've no idea.

So true. I'm still looking out for more soft pink pens. We'll see.

 

Dillon

Stolen: Aurora Optima Demonstrator Red ends Medium nib. Serial number 1216 and Aurora 98 Cartridge/Converter Black bark finish (Archivi Storici) with gold cap. Reward if found. Please contact me if you have seen these pens.

Please send vial orders and other messages to fpninkvials funny-round-mark-thing gmail strange-mark-thing com. My shop is open once again if you need help with your pen.

Will someone with the name of "Jay" who emailed me through the email system provide me an email address? There was no email address provided, so I can't write back.

Dillon

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  • 4 years later...

I got one in soft pink in extra fine. The nib says extra fine but it writes like a medium. Slightly finer but not much difference. It writes wetter than the preppy and the daiso demostrator pen which is a medium and has identical line widths with this fp in extra fine

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Upon browsing their official website, it seems they offer a nib set where you could literally convert your fountain pen into a rollerball by changing the section nib unit. Shipping is crazy expensive. So would be advisable to find a distributor

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