I had a similar experience with my M200 upon arrival. It did not write the way a first-class pen should write, I knew that much -- kind of "scratchy" in a way I didn't expect, and dry. After visiting and searching the FPN Pelikan Board, though, and reading some posts over there, I came to understand that quality control on Pelikan nibs isn't too good these days. The nibs themselves, though, I can say at least from my experience, are outstanding -- or at least mine sure feels that way -- once they are lined up properly.
When i came to understand that my experience with the nib wasn't that unusual, I decided to figure out if I could fix it myself. I like to try and figure things out and fix them myself when I can, so I started reading around and found John Mattishaw's Nibs.com to be a great help, particularly this page:
http://www.nibs.com/Article6SmoothingAdjusting.htmStarting with one of my kid's higher-power magnifying glasses, I came to see that the tines (nib tips) were out of alignment. Also, the center line was not lined up properly over the feed. Some of this I may have caused myself seeking to increase the flow by pulling gently at the wings/shoulders, but given the initial feel, I know for sure that all was not lined up properly. The nib just wasn't right, on delivery.
I am a rank beginner with pens, but also an ex-roofer, which is all about lining things up horizontally and vertically for optimal water flow. So, as I read and messed around, I gradually came to understand that flow was influenced by how well the line down the center of the metal portion of the nib lined up with the center of the feed (the dark plastic stuff). Next, the tines need to line up both horizontally and vertically for a smooth ride on the ink that's flowing. Finally, if I want to increase the flow for a wetter line, I can gently separate the two halves to provide more ink flow. A "very little at a time" approach was my mode of operation throughout.
As I moved forward, I bought a jeweler's loupe at the neighborhood hobby store -- 20 X, I believe, maybe a little stronger -- certainly stronger still when you add my reading glasses. Then I really started seeing things even more clearly, and so set about lining up the center line with the center of the feed, adjusting the tines to line up together properly (Mattishaw's link is great on th is), and getting the flow where I liked it -- which also involved educating myself about inks, papers, etc. I'm not advising anyone to do this kind of deliberate trial and error, but I can say that everything is 100% right with that nib now, and the writing itself is beyond smooth -- to my hand at least. Everything they say about Pelikan quality is true, true, true, once the materials are adjusted properly. Elegant feel to that M200 -- to my hand anyway.
Since that time I have gotten a Pelikano straightened out -- as those tines were out of line on delivery -- and, happiest of all, a Pilot 78G that now writes butter smooth after a scratchier-than-I-prefer start. Just patient, deliberate, less-is-more seems to work best in these undertakings -- and lots of trial and error. The Pilot is wonderful now -- while challenging at first, it is now more than I hoped for. It's actually a very close second to the M200!
I hope to get a fine nib next for my M200, as I like the finer line I'm seeing with the Pilot M nib (I'm told here on FPN that Japanese nibs are finer than European -- and that looks to be true) -- and might even get a second M200, but when I do, will buy from Richard Binder. If I have to, I will try my own adjusting again, but I am just new enough at all of this that I am happy to turn the work over to him as well, so I know from the get-go that all is well. No one reports bad experiences with his nibs -- and I find that to be a powerful reference (disclaimer: no affiliation).
Again, I'm not suggesting anyone try this "at home," but at the same time, we're talking lining up vertical and horizontal lines to produce good flow and smooth nib travel across that flow. It may be tricky, but I don't think it's beyond anyone who can be patient and has at least a good magnifying instrument. Like with cars, houses, etc., one works on what one learns through trial and error that one can do -- and then, turn the rest over to the experts. Plumbing, for example, is something I never try around the house. I've flooded one too many bathrooms in my day, trying to do that stuff on my own. :0 In fact, I just paid a plumber 80 bucks to do a pretty simple job yesterday. Lining up a nib is something I'm willing to try again, though -- and I have gained some confidence in the process over the last few weeks -- but grinding a nib, or other higher order tasks, that ain't me... :0)
All just my view, though. The bottom line is all these people who love the M200 on this Board -- and I'm one of them -- can't all be wrong. I hope yours eventually settles down. The quality, the distinctive elegance of this pen are outstanding in ways I was unable to imagine until I felt the pen really perform in my hand. No turning back now -- this is love... :0)
Best of luck!