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runnjump
We've had a lot of fun in the other thread trying to identify first lines--how about some closing lines?

No wonder of it: sheer plod makes plough down sillion
Shine, and blue-bleak embers, ah my dear,
Fall, gall themselves, and gash gold-vermillion.

Here's one that's both an opening and closing line:
I have been one acquainted with the night.

And here's one for the start of Spring:
These flowery waters and these watery flowers
From snow that melted only yesterday.
Songwind
The play is the tragedy, Man,
And its hero, the Conqueror Worm.

Saints and sinners, go your way.
Youths and maidens, let us pray.
willietheshakes
Nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands

Romagno
Done...the seventeenth day of September, in the year of our LORD one thousand seven hundred and eighty seven."
KingJoe
The truth must dazzle gradually
Or every man be blind-
Shangas
"Oh no...it wasn't the airplanes...It was beauty killed the beast!"

-

"...For tomorrow is another day!"

-

"This *one* time...I'll let you ask me about my business."
"...Is it true?"
"No."

-

"'Winston is back?' Hmm!...AND SO HE BLOODY WELL IS!!"

-

"If you would have the goodness to touch the bell, Doctor, we will begin another investigation in which also a bird will be a chief feature".

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"...In all, six people were saved from the water...six!...out of fifteen hundred!...In the end, the only thing the people in the boats could do was wait...wait to die...wait to live...wait for an absolution..."*

*this is actually inaccurate. In real life, 10 people were saved from the water when the Titanic sank. Two would later die from exposure, making eight people saved.

Songwind
QUOTE(Shangas @ Apr 16 2008, 09:56 AM) [snapback]579782[/snapback]
"Oh no...it wasn't the airplanes...It was beauty killed the beast!"

- King Kong

QUOTE
"...For tomorrow is another day!"


- Gone With the Wind

QUOTE
"This *one* time...I'll let you ask me about my business."
"...Is it true?"
"No."


- The Godfather

QUOTE
"If you would have the goodness to touch the bell, Doctor, we will begin another investigation in which also a bird will be a chief feature".


- The Maltese Falcon?

Shangas
Yes,
Yes,
Yes,
...no.

The bird quote comes from "The Adventure of the Blue Carbuncle" by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle.
DanF
More than a line, but I really like this, the ending of Willa Cather's "Death Comes to the Arc Bishop".


"He had an intellectual curiosity about dying, about the changes that take place in a man's beliefs. He observed that there was no longer any perspective in his memories; he remembered when he was a little boy as clearly as he remembered the building of the cathedral. He sat in the middle of his own consciousness. None of his former states of mind were lost or outgrown, they were all within reach of his hand, and all comprehensible. Something whispered to the ear on the pillow, lightened the heart, softly, softly picked the lock, and slid the bolts, released the imprisoned spirit of man into the wind, into the blue and gold, into the morning, into the morning."

Dan
Takehiko
QUOTE
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore".


--Edgar Allan Poe
Romeo Dog
And so they lived happily ever after.
Univer
Fun thread. Here's one (nobody said it had to be a book or a movie...)

Over and over, the crow cries uncover the cornfield.
Over and over, the thresher and hover the wheat field.


Cheers,

Jon
Shangas
"Never was there a tale of more woe, than that of Juliet and her Romeo..."
kkhon
"The struggle itself towards the heights is enough to fill a man's heart. One must imagine Sisyphus happy."
Treehugger
"I am haunted by waters."
Hoarder68
You'll be a man my son. If by Rudyard Kipling.
HDoug
QUOTE
There is grandeur in this view of life, with its several powers, having been originally breathed into a few forms or into one; and that, whilst this planet has gone cycling on according to the fixed law of gravity, from so simple a beginning endless forms most beautiful and most wonderful have been, and are being, evolved.


On the Origin of Species, by Charles Darwin

Not trying to start a flame, just think it's a nice way of looking at evolution.

Doug
HDoug
QUOTE(Shangas @ Apr 29 2008, 10:21 PM) [snapback]595791[/snapback]
"Never was there a tale of more woe, than that of Juliet and her Romeo..."


Hmm. I'm not an expert, but I had always remembered it:

"For never was a story of more woe
Than this of Juliet and her Romeo."

Doug
Shangas
laugh.gif As you can see, Doug, my Shakespeare is not as good as it could be!
Richard F
QUOTE(runnjump @ Apr 11 2008, 05:29 PM) [snapback]574574[/snapback]
We've had a lot of fun in the other thread trying to identify first lines--how about some closing lines?

No wonder of it: sheer plod makes plough down sillion
Shine, and blue-bleak embers, ah my dear,
Fall, gall themselves, and gash gold-vermillion.

Here's one that's both an opening and closing line:
I have been one acquainted with the night.

And here's one for the start of Spring:
These flowery waters and these watery flowers
From snow that melted only yesterday.


Hopkins, "The Windhover";
Robert Frost;
Frost's "Spring Pools"

ihappen
Has found out thy bed
Of crimson joy,
And his dark secret love
Does they life destroy.
RayMan
Cast a cold eye
On life, on death.
Horseman, pass by!
Amberviv
From "Tales of the two cities":

"It's a far, far better thing I do than I have ever done. It's a far, far better rest I go to than I have ever known."

I would be amazed if I was the only person to nominate this so far.
EventHorizon
I am going to do this one from memory so:

"The dark man fled through the desert and the Gunslinger followed"

Last line of "The Gunsliger" books by Stephen King. It is also the first line in the first book.
Songwind
I gave up on those books after the Badlands or Outlands or whatever it was. With the train. But I loved that line from The Gunslinger. It has been one of my favorites for years.
EventHorizon
QUOTE(Songwind @ May 13 2008, 02:25 PM) [snapback]609693[/snapback]
I gave up on those books after the Badlands or Outlands or whatever it was. With the train. But I loved that line from The Gunslinger. It has been one of my favorites for years.


For me, "The Wolves of Calla" almost did me in. It was the 5th book and I struggled but all the others held my interest.

Edit - It just dawned on me that the original OP was looking for "poems, plays and prose". I am pretty sure my contributiion to this thread is incorrect huh.gif
wednesday_mac
"And all men kill the thing they love,
By all let this be heard,
Some do it with a bitter look,
Some with a flattering word,
The coward does it with a kiss,
The brave man with a sword!"

****

"They bequeathed the whole mystery to their successors and heaved a sigh of relief when they were rid of a business that had puzzled them without amusing them in the least."

****

This one is actually a least favorite closing line because I liked the villian much better than the heroes:

"We want no proofs. We ask none to believe us! This boy will some day know what a brave and gallant woman his mother is. Already he knows her sweetness and loving care. Later on he will understand how some men so loved her, that they did dare much for her sake."


Songwind
QUOTE(EventHorizon @ May 13 2008, 05:09 PM) [snapback]609919[/snapback]
Edit - It just dawned on me that the original OP was looking for "poems, plays and prose". I am pretty sure my contributiion to this thread is incorrect huh.gif


Why? A novel is most certainly prose.
gyasko
This one's quite famous:

Die Philosophen haben die Welt nur verschieden interpretiert, es kömmt drauf an, sie zu verändern.



At the end of a rather long book, one finds

下痢はとうとうその日も止まらず、汽車に乗ってからもまだ続いていた

(Her diarrhea did not stop that day, but went with her even on the train.)




gyasko
QUOTE(wednesday_mac @ May 15 2008, 12:04 AM) [snapback]611130[/snapback]
"And all men kill the thing they love,
By all let this be heard,
Some do it with a bitter look,
Some with a flattering word,
The coward does it with a kiss,
The brave man with a sword!"


That's the ending of the Ballad of Reading Gaol.
Bananafish
"O bitter ending! I'll slip away before they're up. They'll never see. Nor know. Nor miss me. And it's old and old it's sad and old it's sad and weary I go back to you, my cold father, my cold mad father, my cold mad feary father, till the near sight of the mere size of him, the moyles and moyles of it, moananoaning, makes me seasilt saltsick and I rush, my only, into your arms. I see them rising! Save me from those therrble prongs! Two more. Onetwo moremens more. So. Avelaval. My leaves have drifted from me. All. But one clings still. I'll bear it on me. To remind me of. Lff! So soft this morning, ours. Yes. Carry me along, taddy, like you done through the toy fair! If I seen him bearing down on me now under whitespread wings like he'd come from Arkangels, I sink I'd die down over his feet, humbly dumbly, only to washup. Yes, tid. There's where. First. We pass through grass behush the bush to. Whish! A gull. Gulls. Far calls. Coming, far! End here. Us then. Finn, again! Take. Bussoftlhee, mememormee! Till thous- endsthee. Lps. The keys to. Given! A way a lone a last a loved a long the "
Bananafish
... and yes I said yes I will Yes

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Inkling
QUOTE(Bananafish @ May 15 2008, 09:39 AM) [snapback]611472[/snapback]
"O bitter ending! I'll slip away before they're up. They'll never see. Nor know. Nor miss me. And it's old and old it's sad and old it's sad and weary I go back to you, my cold father, my cold mad father, my cold mad feary father, till the near sight of the mere size of him, the moyles and moyles of it, moananoaning, makes me seasilt saltsick and I rush, my only, into your arms. I see them rising! Save me from those therrble prongs! Two more. Onetwo moremens more. So. Avelaval. My leaves have drifted from me. All. But one clings still. I'll bear it on me. To remind me of. Lff! So soft this morning, ours. Yes. Carry me along, taddy, like you done through the toy fair! If I seen him bearing down on me now under whitespread wings like he'd come from Arkangels, I sink I'd die down over his feet, humbly dumbly, only to washup. Yes, tid. There's where. First. We pass through grass behush the bush to. Whish! A gull. Gulls. Far calls. Coming, far! End here. Us then. Finn, again! Take. Bussoftlhee, mememormee! Till thous- endsthee. Lps. The keys to. Given! A way a lone a last a loved a long the "


That made my brain hurt, so I guess it must be Finnegan's wake by that Joyce fellow.
Shangas
Not quite the closing lines, but I love them anyway:

QUOTE
"If you don't get on that plane, you'll regret it. Maybe not now, but soon, and for the rest of your life. Where I'm going you can't follow and what I'm doing you can't be a part of. It doesn't take much to see that the problems of three little people don't amount to a hill of beans in this crazy world!"
"What about us?"
"We'll always have Paris..."


Here's the closing line:

QUOTE
"I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship"


Doubtless all you smart people out there will recognise it at once smile.gif

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QUOTE
"Come on, sucker! I'm gonna take you to Mary!"
"Wha...SHE'S ALIVE?"
"Yeah she's alive...c'mon..."

"Tim, if I wanna thank God, what do I do?"
"Just tell him what's in your heart, Blackie".
"Thank you, God...I really mean it..."


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QUOTE
"Mother of mercy, is this the end of Rico?"
callida
QUOTE(willietheshakes @ Apr 16 2008, 02:21 AM) [snapback]578702[/snapback]
Nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands


That's a wonderful image, I'd love to know where it's from.
Penache
That is the final line of the exquisitely tender poem “Somewhere I Have Never Traveled, Gladly Beyond” by the American poet E.E. Cummings.
Shangas
"Henry! Indy! I know the way, follow me! Yaaah!"

"Once got lost in his own museum, huh?"
"Yeah..."
"Come on, Junior!"
"Junior?"
"Yeah, that's his name! Henry Jones Junior!"
"My name is India--"
"WE CALLED THE DOG INDIANA!"

"You are named...after...THE DOG??? AHahahahahahahahaahaha!!!"
Writer44
Charlie settled into his chair. He took a sip of rum, put a gentle hand atop his cat's head and said, "Don't fall in love my friend."
Richard
La commedia è finita!

(The best rendering of that line I've heard was in a production that had Canio deliver it, instead of Tonio. Talk about ironic.)
Songwind
My favorite disturbing ending line of any book, very easy to recognize.

"Winston loved Big Brother."
Skyppere
This is fun. here are two of my favorites:

"But his gaze at the foot of the bed relaxed slowly. The hold over himself relaxed too, finally and the next day it was very slack and he cried very easily at little things that were of no importance."

"How green was my Valley, then, and the Valley of them that have gone."

Skyp
Shangas
QUOTE(Songwind @ May 19 2008, 01:09 AM) [snapback]614888[/snapback]
My favorite disturbing ending line of any book, very easy to recognize.

"Winston loved Big Brother."


1984 - George Orwell!

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Some more last lines:

"Honey!...Uh...you wanna know who really killed JFK?"

"Double-O-Seven! WHAT do you think you're doing?"
"Keeping the British end up, sir."

"Shoot straight, you bastards! Don't make a mess of it!"*

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*Last lines in the film 'Breaker Morant'. Also the last words spoken (Or a variation thereof) by Lieutenant Harry Harboard Morant, minutes before his execution.
Songwind
QUOTE(Shangas @ May 19 2008, 07:59 AM) [snapback]615587[/snapback]
QUOTE(Songwind @ May 19 2008, 01:09 AM) [snapback]614888[/snapback]
My favorite disturbing ending line of any book, very easy to recognize.

"Winston loved Big Brother."


1984 - George Orwell!

Yep! Doesn't it just give you shivers?

QUOTE
"Honey!...Uh...you wanna know who really killed JFK?"

Oh, man - this is killing me. I KNOW this, but I can't dredge it up.

QUOTE
"Double-O-Seven! WHAT do you think you're doing?"
"Keeping the British end up, sir."

Moonraker?
Shangas
"STOP! STOP! VANDALS! STOP!!!"
"I'm sorry! I'm sorry, I'm sorry! COME ON HONEY! LET'S GO!!"
"STOP!! Vandals!!"

"Honey!...uh...you wanna know who really killed JFK?"

It's the last lines from 'The Rock'. Goodspeed and his girlfriend were just married and Stanley ripped apart one of the church pews to find the microfilm canister that Mason had told him about. He's looking at the film-stills through a loupe (presumably at the assasination of Kennedy) when he says the final line.
Songwind
Of course!

Apparently the "Winners go home with the prom queen" exchange used up all my quote memory for that movie. smile.gif
Shangas
"I'll do my best!"
"your...'best'? Losers always whine about their 'best'. WINNERS go home and **** the prom-queen!"
"Carla was the prom-queen..."
"Oh really?"
"Yeah!"

I loved that bit.
Renzhe
Here are a few off the top of my head:

"氣持ち惡い."

"I'm cold."
callida
QUOTE(Penache @ May 16 2008, 08:36 AM) [snapback]612190[/snapback]
That is the final line of the exquisitely tender poem ?Somewhere I Have Never Traveled, Gladly Beyond? by the American poet E.E. Cummings.


Belatedly - thank you!

I've never read any of e.e.cummings' work, but clearly I should.

~Callida
Songwind
cummings is alternately inspiring, beautiful, disturbing, and confusing. Sometimes a mixture.

Makes me want to dig out my book when I get home.
Arthur's Mom
Give me your hands, if we be friends,
And Robin shall restore amends.
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